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Faye Kittie 07-27-2009 05:29 AM

1st and 2nd animation, Improvement?
 
Here is my first and second animation

Is there improvement in the frames?

I'd love your opinion.

Yet again these are my first two so im just starting out.

The art and animation are 100% by me based of Roliana avatars.

Also this style is up for bids at my art auction if you happen to like them.

I have 6 styles up for bid in all, more when i get the samples for them.

Check it out.


Animation 1
[x]

Animation 2
[x]

WitchySanura 07-27-2009 06:08 AM

Nice job! I love the first one, very smooth. The second one kinda reminds me of a pinball machine the way her eyebrows keep going up and down lol. I'd leave those stationary and maybe slow the animation just a tad. But that's personal preference *shrugs* I think you did an awesome job on them though.

Faye Kittie 07-27-2009 08:07 AM

Thanks, yeah I did make more frames for the second one but it just didnt look right so i made her blink very fast to keep the cuteness.

About the eyebrows I think i can redo it to were they dont move, maybe it will look better.

Jack MacGaven 07-27-2009 10:37 AM

I think you should add some more frames. Just to make it look more natural and smooth.

For the first animation I suggest that you redo the ear. Donīt just simply move it, redraw it frame by frame, it looks very stiff this way.
You could also add 2 or 3 more frames on the eye animation.

And for the second: slow it down. It's waaaay too fast to make it look natural.

Got a question for you: What program do you use for it?

Oh and trust me, it's damn hard to make good animations. I'm studying animation for 1 and a half year and I still have trouble making things look nice.

Faye Kittie 07-27-2009 11:20 AM

I actually made the frames for the second animation smoother but didnt like it.

I guess i can make a whole other animation and see how it works out.

chibifox1027 07-30-2009 11:19 PM

its very nice!
expecially for a first and seconds time drawing.
Next time try putting more detail. The fact that you got the idea from an avatar doesnt impress me tho.:|

Maka-chan 08-01-2009 03:48 AM

awesome Job!!keep it up!


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