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Kuro-chan 08-10-2009 12:48 AM

Comments and criticism, pretty please? :'D
 
Haaaaay. Just finished a piece of art I did for a friend's contest, and I couldn't help but sit back and think how much I liked it. :3 So, I thought I'd come show it off~ I can't change anything on the picture, but, any help for further pics would be awesome~

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z...contest109.png

linkfreak131 08-10-2009 01:34 AM

Your anatomy looks off to me in the neck and head area, and the coloring looks very flat to me. But it's nice over all.

13th 08-10-2009 07:35 AM

This is really good ^^
I like the coloring especially
But think about: The legs has to fit the body and not just the dress. If you placed them a little more to the right, it would probably work
Otherwise this is one of the more pro pics on menewsha, so good work ^^

Maka-chan 08-11-2009 04:32 AM

amazing job!keep it up!


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