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Old 08-11-2009, 07:44 PM

Does my art look good or bad?

Heres my Deviantart, all my art is in my gallery.
^-^

http://kyoishot6801.deviantart.com/

I guess my art sucks.... No one wants to comment it!!
T^T

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Old 08-11-2009, 11:17 PM

Its ok...
but you might want to work on getting the proportions right... the legs on the Maid one are a little short. but the angel one is good ^__^ and maybe you should work on the face.... but i'd give it a 6/10

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Old 08-11-2009, 11:58 PM

Sorry , but i guess u have to find aneother hobby :/

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Old 08-12-2009, 01:31 PM

Aspirina, rude comments are not constructive. Instead of just insulting someone give them a reason as to why or how they need to improve.

Coaxial- It would help if you posting images instead of just a link. Its easier on people who would give advice if they don't have to go hunting for the art works. :3

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Old 08-12-2009, 05:45 PM

The angel one is cute. Maybe using the dark marker on it helped. Also it was in more of an interesting pose. The maid could of used more detail on the face. The hair was only okay as well. Maybe make it go out in more directions instead of making it all the same length and ending at the same perfect line of a length. If that made sense o-o Good luck though o3o

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Old 08-14-2009, 07:07 AM

I like it. the more you draw the betetr you get. I started drawing with anime and used that as a base to jump into other styles of drawing.

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Old 08-14-2009, 04:08 PM

You have potential and your doing a fine job. :D
All you need to do is practice practice practice. However I would like to see more of your pictures with your characters eyes open most of your pictures everyone's eyes are closed.

Eyes alone give the most volume in a picture. (In my opinion) :P

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Old 08-15-2009, 01:04 AM

it seems you just started drawing recently. my only advice is to practice and draw draw draw a lot more, FROM LIFE.
seriously. if you want to achieve anything as and artist, at the beginning draw from life ONLY or at least as much as you can .

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Old 08-27-2009, 03:36 PM

Not bad. ^_^ I see the start of some good art. Keep practicing and I'm sure you can improve! :3 I have been drawing since grade school (I'm 25 now.) and my art probably looked like that at some point... and now I travel conventions and sell art. Don't give up!

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Old 09-09-2009, 07:26 PM

Yeah, it looks like you just started drawing. Just study on anatomy and in another case, keep drawing. If you keep drawing, you're more likely to improve.

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Old 09-10-2009, 08:07 PM

I agree with Chiiruchan, just practice! :D

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Old 09-13-2009, 11:13 AM

It actually looks good - the lines are clear and it looks that you are trying to draw the characters in different poses :>
I suggest two tings - keep practising, because you have a high potential. And draw hands - don't hide them :> Even if they'll look awkard, but draw them - they can be as much important as eyes :D

I'd give 8/10 -1 for no hands and -1 because you draw only anime. There are so many amazing art styles - you don't have to stick only to the most commercial one.


BTW - nice photo of you there :>

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Old 09-21-2009, 03:40 PM

Ther is potential, I like how simplistic you make it but you do need to work on the actual anatomy. Try just drawing bodies until you start to get the hang of it.

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Old 09-27-2009, 01:07 AM

agh its pretty guood

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Old 09-28-2009, 02:00 AM

I think it's rather cute.
Just..Needs more detail.

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Old 09-28-2009, 08:57 PM

they're quite all right ; just practise and study anatomy a little bit more... We all started somewhere.

 


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