What do you think about my art?
 

Hiya!
I made a sketch for a friend,
can you tell me what you think about the proportions?
Constrictuve criticism is very appreciated

http://i366.photobucket.com/albums/o...art/swarf1.jpg =3



edit:
http://i366.photobucket.com/albums/o...arf_big1-1.jpg

It took me a minute to find something you could make better, it's so awesome! only issue I see is the hand on the hip doesn't really look like it's rested on it. It's kind of odd... otherwise, amazing work!

thank you very much =D
And yes the hand was bothering me quite a while >.<
I tryed to layer the jacket over it, but it still doesn't look right Dx
I will try to turn it somehow. Does anyone have good reference images for a hand? =O

I actually have an idea- Maybe you could lightly shade the back of the hand (towards the wrist) so it looks like it's a bit further back and maybe wrinkle the jacket a bit where the hand is... just an idea.

Your welcome :D

i like it! a lot! i feel humbled. :o

Whoa! I just realized that's 4 someone on Gaia! yay i'm part of Gaia as well! (same username there, too)

OH my....That is a very good drawing. O.O Good Job!

Lolz I am from Gaia too. Same user. x3 Rofl

it is realy nice :)

is it gaia art ?

I really like it. It's a realistic style, but it's pretty cool. I think the proportions are good, you did a really good job ^^

Like Misha_Heart said the hand on the hips is a little awkward, but the mouth to me also looks a bit odd like his puckering up XD

you did a great job with it overall ^_^

is that smok the baby dragon?? the guy looks fiiine~

I rather like it. It's pretty detailed and awesomely drawn. *two thumbs up*

thank you everyone x3

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