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Angel Seraphiel
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08-12-2009, 12:01 PM
Hiya!
I made a sketch for a friend,
can you tell me what you think about the proportions?
Constrictuve criticism is very appreciated
 =3
edit:
Last edited by Angel Seraphiel; 08-19-2009 at 01:41 PM..
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Misha_Heart
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08-12-2009, 12:47 PM
It took me a minute to find something you could make better, it's so awesome! only issue I see is the hand on the hip doesn't really look like it's rested on it. It's kind of odd... otherwise, amazing work!
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Angel Seraphiel
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08-12-2009, 12:49 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Misha_Heart
It took me a minute to find something you could make better, it's so awesome! only issue I see is the hand on the hip doesn't really look like it's rested on it. It's kind of odd... otherwise, amazing work!
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thank you very much =D
And yes the hand was bothering me quite a while >.<
I tryed to layer the jacket over it, but it still doesn't look right Dx
I will try to turn it somehow. Does anyone have good reference images for a hand? =O
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Misha_Heart
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08-12-2009, 12:51 PM
I actually have an idea- Maybe you could lightly shade the back of the hand (towards the wrist) so it looks like it's a bit further back and maybe wrinkle the jacket a bit where the hand is... just an idea.
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Angel Seraphiel
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08-12-2009, 12:56 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Misha_Heart
I actually have an idea- Maybe you could lightly shade the back of the hand (towards the wrist) so it looks like it's a bit further back and maybe wrinkle the jacket a bit where the hand is... just an idea.
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thank you, this is actually a really good idea =D
I will do so and post the changes here, later on 8D
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Misha_Heart
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08-12-2009, 01:02 PM
Your welcome :D
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Cruelly Beautiful
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08-14-2009, 03:37 AM
i like it! a lot! i feel humbled. :o
Whoa! I just realized that's 4 someone on Gaia! yay i'm part of Gaia as well! (same username there, too)
Last edited by Melody; 08-14-2009 at 02:43 PM..
Reason: double post
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L y k e 0 m g
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08-14-2009, 04:45 AM
OH my....That is a very good drawing. O.O Good Job!
Lolz I am from Gaia too. Same user. x3 Rofl
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Luna Kittie
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08-14-2009, 05:38 AM
it is realy nice :)
is it gaia art ?
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Angel Seraphiel
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08-15-2009, 07:23 PM
thank you everyone
yes this is gaia art for a good friend there =3
And I am also on Gaia, same name xP
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fuyumi_saito
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08-15-2009, 10:17 PM
I really like it. It's a realistic style, but it's pretty cool. I think the proportions are good, you did a really good job ^^
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Azika
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08-16-2009, 01:42 AM
Like Misha_Heart said the hand on the hips is a little awkward, but the mouth to me also looks a bit odd like his puckering up XD
you did a great job with it overall ^_^
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Freiheitsflugel
The Tokio Hotel worshipper...
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08-16-2009, 10:53 PM
is that smok the baby dragon?? the guy looks fiiine~
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GoCloud!
Final Fantasy Fan!!
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08-16-2009, 11:02 PM
I rather like it. It's pretty detailed and awesomely drawn. *two thumbs up*
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Angel Seraphiel
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08-19-2009, 01:40 PM
thank you everyone x3
<3333
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rouge282
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08-27-2009, 12:08 AM
Nice sketh intersing style and he has a nice pose xd
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