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Himiwari 08-12-2009 03:03 PM

Critique please
 
Well? What do you think?
http://i252.photobucket.com/albums/h...star/frdew.jpg

Mistress Edeen 08-12-2009 04:37 PM

She is cute. =3
I only think that her legs are too short regarding her body.

Aspirina_br 08-12-2009 04:43 PM

Awesome , u just need to color it :s

Himiwari 08-12-2009 04:48 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mistress Edeen (Post 1764837034)
She is cute. =3
I only think that her legs are too short regarding her body.

Eh, kinda. I guess.

@Aspirina_br - LOL, I'm horrible at coloring. D:

colorful set 08-12-2009 04:56 PM

I think the legs are fine. If you are doing this style as like a chibi or w/e maybe make the torso shorter instead of the legs.
:3

Himiwari 08-12-2009 07:02 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by colorful set (Post 1764837426)
I think the legs are fine. If you are doing this style as like a chibi or w/e maybe make the torso shorter instead of the legs.
:3

Okay, thanks.

R3i_D3adAim 08-12-2009 07:06 PM

Cute! I would suggest maybe inking the lines a little so that it isn't so light.

Himiwari 08-12-2009 07:11 PM

Yeah, but right now I don't have any inking pens or whatever.
I'm gonna buy some soon, but I don't know which ones I should get.

R3i_D3adAim 08-12-2009 07:13 PM

Ah. Try finding Pigma sensei. They're not as expensive as other pens, but they're good with inking manga and such. :)

Himiwari 08-12-2009 07:30 PM

I'll keep that in mind.

R3i_D3adAim 08-12-2009 07:32 PM

:)

shayaltra 08-12-2009 08:39 PM

real cute the eyes need a lil work in my opinion u should have made a pupil ^-^ other than that adorable

Syan 08-13-2009 08:34 AM

I think it's absolutely adorable. And honestly, I don't see anything wrong with it, considering the style that it is in. ;3

As for the whole inking pen thing, try for Sakura Microns, Prisma Color Liners, or Fabre-Castell. They are more expensive, but they are worth the price. Rather than getting cheaper pens that give a lower quality. I would suggest Copic Multiliners, but they are about $2.50 per pen, and $8.00 per the refillable ones.

Bunbun_chompper 08-14-2009 07:10 AM

That is a very cute picture. I wish I can draw cute things like that.


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