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Mesmerized 08-16-2009 02:19 AM

Kagemi x Kyosei
 
Hey!
Here are 2 entries for a contest over GaiaOnline. The characters are (c) Kagemi.

The first one is of Kagemi and Kyosei together (they're a couple)
The second one is Kagemi dressed up for halloween! ^^ This entry was pretty rushed, hence the flat colors and no shading =x So in case you point that out, I already know that lol.
Buuut... any cc welcomed, I also know Kyosei looks kinda awkward o.O

Also, the texture on the first one is by Freaky665!

http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/2302/tatiiii1.png

http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/2815/tatiiiiv22.png

Also, you can check my DeviantArt! <3
Click here! >;D

Thanks for looking!
-cookies for all!- :)

Flowery Pit 08-16-2009 05:47 AM

Oooh I like a lot!

For the first picture, I really like the girl's top; I want it now! I like that shine effect, it's really nice. The way you colored the skin looks really good; I admire how you color. I don't see how it's "flat". Whatchoo talkin' about? The only thing that's awkward to me, is the way they're holding the popsicles. The guy's arm is a bit awkward too; the arm holding zee popsicle. Either way I still really likies. :)

The second picture I like how the coloring is so simple but yet it looks fantastic! But for some reason she looks like she's sitting to me and I can't get that outta my head. I think it's her skirt and the way her legs are placed. Or I'm retarded.

Fabulous art!

Mesmerized 08-16-2009 05:43 PM

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Originally Posted by Flowery Pit (Post 1764912462)
Oooh I like a lot!

For the first picture, I really like the girl's top; I want it now! I like that shine effect, it's really nice. The way you colored the skin looks really good; I admire how you color. I don't see how it's "flat". Whatchoo talkin' about? The only thing that's awkward to me, is the way they're holding the popsicles. The guy's arm is a bit awkward too; the arm holding zee popsicle. Either way I still really likies. :)

The second picture I like how the coloring is so simple but yet it looks fantastic! But for some reason she looks like she's sitting to me and I can't get that outta my head. I think it's her skirt and the way her legs are placed. Or I'm retarded.

Fabulous art!

Thanks alot! :)
Ahh yes, I can see that... his arm is waay too weird isn't it? lol I'll have to work more with arms and stuff ._.
Hmm... I think I see it too. I don't know, it looked fine when she didn't have that gigantic dress, but after I drew it it seemed wrong. Hmph.
Thanks for the reply!

13th 08-25-2009 08:59 PM

I like your coloring and setup, but the necks are veeery long compared to the rest of their bodies...
Though it seems you want to keep the last pic simple, shading would do good on it ^^' Otherwise I like the simpleness in the pic, and the dress is also made good

Mesmerized 08-28-2009 10:48 PM

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Originally Posted by 13th (Post 1764973103)
I like your coloring and setup, but the necks are veeery long compared to the rest of their bodies...
Though it seems you want to keep the last pic simple, shading would do good on it ^^' Otherwise I like the simpleness in the pic, and the dress is also made good

Yeah, I noticed that after I colored it and everything... the guy's neck looks like a chicken's LOL.
Thanks for the input! ^^


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