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WolfRain Dc-ed 08-18-2009 11:41 AM

What do you think of my OC?
 

Hey hey! XD

I've done this a couple of months ago... i think xD It was my first time manipulating one of my drawings in Photoshop CS4 ...

http://i295.photobucket.com/albums/m...ianVampire.jpg

what do you think? :D

I named him Aten, (actually i used Facebook's Name Generator to get his unique name XD )

And he is one of my OCs (oroginal characters), so please please PLEASE dont steal him D:

I tweaked the background picture and the drawing to get this effect, so that the drawing will somehow not stand out too much from the background... (I tried, though .__.)

The background I used can be found here: http://www.flickr.com/photos/ggnyc/1772747707/

and my original drawing of Aten is here: http://wolfrain319.deviantart.com/art/A-T-E-N-127045844

You can find this piece I just showed you in my deviantART account here:
http://wolfrain319.deviantart.com/ar...pire-127045925


rom-chan 08-23-2009 08:06 PM

He's very hawt, I would tackle him down and go all freaky on that man WOOH.

Jk jk, but he is quite handsome.

fuyumi_saito 08-25-2009 09:41 PM

very hot. might need to be a bit more proportioned better, but other than that pretty good.I think it might need a bit more shading though but it's a good start coloring wise.

WolfRain Dc-ed 08-28-2009 01:31 PM

Thanks a lot for the tips and compliments :3

They really mean a lot to me ^_^

angelbunny1391 08-29-2009 06:12 AM

awesome ^_^

13th 08-30-2009 08:00 PM

Looks like you've read/watched Hellsing...? O.o
I like the char, he's very unique
Your drawing skills seem good, though his chest is sitting a little too low
But remember that the drawing has to fit the background. If you want to use that background, you should also color and shade the drawing in photoshop, otherwise it just look wrong - that was constructive critique X3
Good luck

Yiehtk 08-31-2009 02:35 AM

Nice.

I like the use of the background, and it seems fitting for his character.

The anatomy on the torso is well done, but the arm and face appear flat. Also, the thing on his neck appears awkward. Not the design, his design is great, but it seems... not right in proportion. I can't tell if it's a cloth piece that is see through some parts or a tattoo, and it goes over a shoulder on the farside.

But great character in all. I like his name.

DingDong 08-31-2009 09:29 AM

@Fuyumi : cute sig =3
@Forum : awesome picture ! very hot xD . gyaaayy ! >.<

~LONGCAT~ 09-01-2009 02:07 AM

Nice muscles, but you need some work on the profile. something is off about it. but otherwise good job.

Maka-chan 09-01-2009 06:08 AM

sweet job dude keep it up!

PhantomLolita 09-01-2009 07:48 AM

This reminds me of Egyptian art...I really love it. I don't really think it needs changing...I like the style a lot.


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