I can see what your were trying to do but it came out a little sloppy. Porportion needs some work, but I like the way you drew the eyes ^^

Nice work.

Although on the first one, I'm not sure why some lines, such as the ears, are darker than the others. If you were doing it on purpose, try not to pick such a darker color. Also, the shoulders are too broad.

The second one's shoulders are a bit too narrow. They look as if they are unable to come all the way down.

The eyes and face shapes are lovely though. I also like the hair on the first one.

mad sketchy, but I can see that you have your own style, but you might want to work on refining lines and proportions.

Originally Posted by Yiehtk

Nice work.

Although on the first one, I'm not sure why some lines, such as the ears, are darker than the others. If you were doing it on purpose, try not to pick such a darker color. Also, the shoulders are too broad.

The second one's shoulders are a bit too narrow. They look as if they are unable to come all the way down.

The eyes and face shapes are lovely though. I also like the hair on the first one.

Yeah, the ears are elves ears so i wanna put em darker. and thaks for ty comment!:angel:

the nose on the first is too low and with a low nose comes a low mouth :I + she has broad shoulders (don't know if that's waht you're going for...) and on the second one it looks like she's shoulder-less :0 but i love the uniqueness

i like them but i keep looking at them and notice the shoulders are too broad on the first one, the ears if they are elven should probably be out a bit more or something like that anyway and it looks like she doesn't have a nose.

the second is no nose again, no shoulders, and the blushes aren't even equal if those are blush lines and i take it those are bottom eyelashes but it looks like her eyes aren't spot on either. sorry but you did ask.

i would suggest working on porportions and lines but i do like them. congrats. very unique.