I'm back on Mene~

I quite sometime last year but I couldn't keep myself away so here I am again. xD


Newest one||





Check out my older doodles:




ANDDD... WIPs (Work In Progress)||

a crap scan of my WIP (Work In Progress) doodle of Black ★ Rock Shooter

The facial features are lovely, but the legs and skin appear a bit flat. Everywhere else on your pictures you have some kind of shading, but not on the skin. It makes them appear flat.

Now, the face doesn't always need shading, but the legs on the second picture lack definition. You may not need to shade if you make them more realistic and curvy. Which, on another note, your arms also seem flat and noodly.

I love how you do hair and eyes though, and the way you draw cheeks and chins. The hair is also very well done.

Great job.

I agree with her but I think the pictures look fantastic. c:

The second one is awesome! The only thing that needs improvement is the hand and her bum/legs. Though her arms are beyond skinny ^^'

Thanks guys.

The second one is a WIP (work in progress) which is why it's not shaded

=o Hey Usuri. Remember me?

I really like the first one, especially the way you did her head. But her head loooks a bit off center, maybe because of the way her arm connects. I'm not sure, but something seems wrong in that section. Also, on the arm to my left, the elbow seems to come too close to the shoulder. On the opposite arm, the upper arm looks way longer than the lower arm. And she does look a bit too skinny.

Hiya~

Yea, I remember you :3

The first one is a fashion design sketch so yea, her proportions are a little bit weird. xD

I was just concentrating on the dress.