Critique My Art Please?
 

New to Menewsha and am just trying to make some gold by uploading some art and what-not. : D

This is of Gunji, from Togainu no Chi, and me. I have this sick obsession with the game/manga. D: It's just so amazing!

http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m...withTattoo.jpg

Now I would like to kindly ask for suggestions on what needs to be changed.
I know that the claws are all funky lookin', it's the best I can do with them. D:

The girl's eyes look really strange to me. They don't look like they're looking at anything in particular, just staring off into space... That needs fixing. >.<

It sorta looks like his arms just taper down into one finger... you should make the hand itself more visible, and have at least 2 or 3 fingers showing from underneath the claws.

Bigger hands ;D

Where is her right arm? O.O