Marina (oc)
 

hey all well i did this not to long ago I'm not to sure but i think something may be missing from her, she's been a character of mine for a while but I haven't drawn her all that much your input is greatly needed!

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g8...ma/sadness.jpg

Wow, I really love the body language and expression, both of which are something that I struggle with.
As for what could be missing...maybe the depth of her body. The left shoulder almost looks too close, at least how it brings the left arm up to her chest. I think that it should be tucked back a little bit with the forearm as is. Other than that, though, I can't think of a thing. I really like the way you did the pose and facial expression. I hope that this helps.

ooooo :0 nice :>
I like her pose and the black rough backround - they both fit perfectly! Personally I can't say anything bad about this drawing - maybe only that the head and the face look a bit out of proportion, but it is easy to fix by practise and time =3

Again - really nice drawing :>

thank you both it really does help XD not to get a new sketch book.

@Cursed_by_the_sirens: I hope you ment "now to get a new sketch book":> ;3

I think the body was drawn well. kinda feel like the hair is covering the face though, so I think maybe a different hair style would work. I really like the shirt, it's totally cute!

It's a good drawing overall ^^ keep up the good work!

Thanks again to everyone! and yes i was having issues with hair then >_> and yes i did mean "to get a new sketch book" lol XD

I hope we will see more of your amazing art then :3

you shall....I'll just have to go home( my parents place) to bum there scanner >D

It does feel like she needs to open up a bit, try facing her forward just a tad more.
And is her left eye supposed to be so high? I don't know how you draw your characters but I think if it was a little lower so it was out of her hair then maybe the little addition of colour would make er pop more.