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Old 09-23-2009, 02:15 PM

hi! this is Kimi-chan! I was wondering if you would rate my art.
this art is of my fictional character Lady Dio. I hope to one day use her in an anime series that is currently in the making. I have a long way to go before I can actually do professional art, though. v.v"






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Old 09-23-2009, 03:43 PM

I like how simple it is but you should ink it so the lines really pop, that'd look great.
Also her wrists are bent weird in the first picture.

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Old 09-23-2009, 04:32 PM

yeah sorry about that. I absolutely hate drawing fingers and hands. If I would have drawn the fingers on you would have been able to see the pose of the hands more clearly. v.v as I said I have a long way to go.
thank you for your judgment Chocolamule! :3

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Old 09-25-2009, 03:35 AM

It's really cute!
She reminds me of Toph from Avatar a bit.
I like your art style.

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Old 09-25-2009, 01:16 PM

I do have to admit Toph and Lucy were my main inspiration. :sweat:

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Old 09-28-2009, 05:05 PM

It looks really good :3
But you have a long way to go until becoming a professional and it's good that you have something motivating and inspiring! =3

All I could recommend is only to star liking drawing everything - especially the human body: if you loved it from the top to the tips of it's toes and you'd be surprised how fast your skill would increase then :D

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Old 09-28-2009, 05:08 PM

Aww..I think your drawings are very cute. The poses are great ^^ You might wanna work on proportion a bit more. It's not too bad though, so no worries. It's just the arms in the second drawing looks very thin. Other than that I don't see any other problems with it ^^

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Old 09-30-2009, 02:07 AM

Oh there cute but she is so sad. you should put up one where she is happy. :)

There well drawn too I have to say.

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Old 09-30-2009, 02:10 AM

she look like toph, form that avatar show

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Old 09-30-2009, 05:55 PM

i would like to see a full body turn around of her

 


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