My doodles, critique?
 

Here, they are kind of old.. from 8th grade to last year I think?

A relationship, please don't think freaky!
http://i34.tinypic.com/33lh2c9.jpg

Amarant, Scarlett Hair from FFIX
http://i35.tinypic.com/vf5om.jpg

Of course, Maplestory haha. This was my Cleric, I drew ahead of time, but my character was level 48 at the time, if I recall.
http://i33.tinypic.com/25hlr9u.jpg

My friend wanted me to draw this, I hate it. It's ugly. It's a Maplestory Character created through the Maple dress up emulator thing.
http://i38.tinypic.com/6g99p3.jpg

Eiko from FFIX. Took me a LONG time to draw this. I'm still not satisfied with it.
http://i36.tinypic.com/6zx2qr.jpg

One BIG thing you need to work on is proportioning. Don't forget to do some shading either or else pictures tend to look flat and boring. there are many tutorials around the web that can help you improve your technique. here's one that explains the basics: http://morayah.deviantart.com/art/Ha...orial-88785236