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Azika 10-07-2009 05:06 AM

tried my hand at still life, critic please?
 
I had to do these 2 for homework. the teacher says their great but then again he says that to everyone so i'd like the opinion of others. And in case you wanna see more of my work i have a mini art gallery: http://www.menewsha.com/forum/art/ar...t-gallery.html

Salt Shaker
http://i288.photobucket.com/albums/l...saltshaker.jpg

Tea Cup
http://i288.photobucket.com/albums/l...ife-teacup.jpg

Xaef 10-07-2009 07:40 PM

I love the second one!!! Very good!

But, the first one-
It's leaning on a weird axis. The drawing is good, but it's not straight. Was your paper at a weird angle?

Azika 10-07-2009 10:21 PM

yea i know i can't figure out why it turned out like that. it probably was in a weird angle and i just never noticed...

Xaef 10-08-2009 06:28 AM

Hm, well. The second drawing seems alright. I think it's just a smidge off center, but it's no where near as bad as the first one. So it kind of just looks like it must have been the angle you had the paper or something.

It's still very good. I love the shading. I could never get my drawings to look that good when we studied shading. :p


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