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Chishio 11-01-2009 06:39 PM

So tell me what you think its my latest drawling i did it for a contest on elftown ^^
http://elftown.com/img/photo/184758_1256680448.jpg


you can see more of my art at my DA account if you would like ^^DancingSakuraPetal

Imoto-chan_Always 11-02-2009 03:27 AM

I think it's really pretty. The outfit itself is quite nice (simple yet interesting,) although I can't say I'm crazy about the green/brown colour you used on the wings. I would be really interested in seeing the necklace in more detail; it looks like something that could be really wearable. Also, the hair is nice. Almost realistic, yet still beautiful and fitting for fantasy.

Symphonic Trance 11-06-2009 05:18 AM

I actually like the green-brown color on the wings. I think it works. I really love the little mask she has on. The only thing I don't like is the fact that her one eye shows through her hair. Other than that, it looks really nice C:

WhiteSerenade 11-08-2009 12:58 AM

I like the top, although the colors for the wings are a little... bleh. =P

13sReborn 11-15-2009 11:13 AM

Well. It's very cute, but I think you could've spent a little more time on the colouring, so that all of the colours are evenly blended together, so that there aren't any of those white spots and lines showing up.
And the legs are a little strange. The right one is bigger than the left. lol;; :U
But I like the ears a lot. :'33

Sam. 11-15-2009 03:47 PM

It's very cute. :) I like the outfit.

Narule_Mangaka 11-20-2009 05:21 AM

Aw that face is too cute! It's to die for!!! I do feel like it starts lacking around the hips. I think maybe the torso is too long and the hips are a bit too small compared to the shoulders. They're making the legs look a bit odd too. Make sure you draw the body structure before you add clothing! ^_^

Rise-Against-Always 11-27-2009 11:03 PM

its so cute!

BinkaKitty 11-28-2009 06:26 AM

that's really cute, but might i suggest making the outfit a little brighter? you can see that outline bit of coloring, which ruins it slightly. i know that's hard to avoid, but it would look even better if that could be fixed. other than that little detail, i love it! =^_^=

Ainoryoku 11-29-2009 11:55 AM

so, let's criticize *smiles*:

I love the collar~<3
very nice accesories~ <3 love the arm things and leg and earings~<3 you are good at details~<3
eye should be fading, dress is interesting, same as above for wings, but the fairy is very nice

SorrowsxEnd 01-01-2010 12:12 AM

I love the colors use and the outfit. If you change anything, you should thing about changing how you cover the eye with the hair. It makes it look like the eye in front of the hair. Which make the picture look unrealistic. If you change that a bit then the picture would look perfect.

LVHAXOR 01-10-2010 01:41 AM

not bad

Deletris 01-27-2010 06:36 PM

lovely~! and its an elf too >3< the only thing is watch the proportion :x i think her head ish too big

peachgirl 01-29-2010 08:36 PM

It is a very cute fairy/elf. Nice details on the ears and garter. I could not tell if you meant to have one leg a little behind the other, but one thigh seems a lot bigger than the other. Nice shape of the wings. The coloring was a little on the sketchy side, but not bad. I liked how the corsette seemed almost netted. The half mask was bombing, but might I suggesting putting it on the other side of her face to offset the dress? Just a thought. Very cute drawing all together. Nice job! ;)


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