A lineart of Miku. Hope you guys like it, I'd actually like your opinions on it. I'd also like to know which colors you think would go best.

I am the artist, zoom-zoom-divorce is my deviantart account.

The lines look nice and clean!
I do think that her hair could be much longer, though. I mean, it's Miku, she has hair that never ends!

I think you should go for a pink-ish dress. Go for the 'World's mine' colours.

The longer the hair gets, the harder it gets. Believe me D;

But I may edit it when I get home from school today. She DOES have longer hair, it's just, I plan on coloring it, so shading long hair is difficult.

Oh, well, I will try.

Do you mean the colors in 'world is mine' video?

You could also cheat a bit and work with gradients. ;)
I know that long hair is a pain to draw, but practise makes perfect, no?

Yep, that's exactly what I mean.

That's really cute ^.^

Its sort of a relief to get a person here who understands proportion as most artists looking for critique do not. Pose is cute, expression is nice. I do agree with Jack though, practice makes perfect, you'll never get better at longer hair if you dont try it.

I did try with the long hair. It was horrible D:

Any I only sometimes get proportions when it comes to anatomy right. This time, although there are parts that still look icky, I just got lucky.
I am gonna work on this again later.

I also need to work on folds when it comes to clothing. I'm not good at that.
And obviously, my clothing has absolutely no folds.

Folds are usually suggested when you start colouring and shading ;)

I can't really see anything icky... I'd suggest you start colouring and then post your wip again.

That is perfect. I cant find anything you could improve on. I lobe the hair and her eyes, for me that is what makes a picture good or bad.

It looks pretty awesome. The left arm looks a little strange but maybe that's just me. ^^

It looks good, the only thing is, where her left breast ends at the bottom, the line
where the body starts is a bit too much to the left, it makes her look a bit less female,
she looks a bit wide.
I realy hope you understand what I mean cause i'm bad in explaining xD
I like how you did the eyes ^^