I finally made the line of this drawing...I finished it a while ago, but I couldn't motivate myself enough to work on it again.

Here is the result !
Lenna is an original character belonging to Zulma-san.

Ugh, the composition, it is great. I think it takes quite a bit of an artist to not only draw someone but to draw them from an aesthetic angle/pose/ etc. instead of the usual straight forward.

Anatomically, however, I will give some suggestions, especially on the face. He(?) has a rather anime-ish face, which may be what you are going for, but if not, I recommend making the mouth bigger - mouths tend to go about to the middle of the eye in length. The eyes, also, are too large. They seem to go too far down the nose, and if one ever saw the skull of your human, the eye sockets would be ridiculously large.

The eyes, if you did digitally, can be shrank digitally using a selection and transform tool (if you have an art program for it). And I wouldn't worry about the eyebrows, they look fine.

There's my two cents.

wow very beautiful,keep up the good work

I love how she's looking now at the viewer. Also, the hair is great and I think that this is a wonderful piece.

looks good to me

I lovelovelove the hair and the arm! :O
The face is good, too, but the nose and the jawline look a bit off. Perhaps draw them more pronounced as they look a little bit flat right now.

stunning *-* the hair is just amazing, what program did you use for the line art o.o?

Beautiful. It is simple, but still really lovely. The hair does it all.

I like it. I love the emotion in the face. The hair, I love long hair. Really beautiful!

The eyes aren't in proportion to the face, but if you're going for an anime style I guess its okay. The hair is great though, you did an awesome job there. : )

I think she is really beautiful. I love how she's looking off, and how her hair flows. The only thing I'd have to say I don't like is how, although her hair flows over her chest, she doesn't seem to have a chest..

The forehead is sticking out a bit too much and the arm looks small. I love the hair and the eyes. The girl looks really passionate XD

I love the hair and postion of this drawing.
I think all the extra curls on the hair at the bottom make it look really nice.

the hair looks really great~

nice drawing :)