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ghostPastry 01-13-2010 09:39 AM

Perspective Practice. Critique, pretty please!
 
So, I decided to practice drawing head angles with my OC, Avelina and HamletSpamlet's OC, Daniel, from our RP. I have difficulty drawing men in general, so Daniel was a real challenge. Dx
I'd like to note that the disproportionately large eyes and hair are part of Avelina's character design. ^^;
Critiques and red/blue lines are much appreciated! :)

http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/f/20...briannamal.jpg

http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/f/20...briannamal.jpg

sarofset 01-14-2010 10:15 AM

You did good. I told you I would think so, but you didn't believe me, so now I'm leaving a message to tell you. :)

ghostPastry 01-15-2010 08:07 PM

Thank you. :)
Is there anything you think I could improve on? :<

RyaLee 01-15-2010 11:29 PM

this is going to sound weird but your neck thickness isn't very consistent [XD] the neck looks way too thin on some of the angles with both of the characters, just make sure it's a good medium between the too thick and too thin.

ghostPastry 01-16-2010 01:49 AM

Ah, yeah, I see what you mean... thanks! I'll work on that. :)


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