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Old 01-20-2010, 03:08 AM

I like making friends that are artist so that they can help me with my art. So please tell me your likes and dislikes. . . K. :P






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Old 01-20-2010, 05:25 AM

wow amazing O_O and the second one looks off a manga or something

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Old 01-20-2010, 10:37 PM

Yea I got a manga program and was trying it out.

The kitties are sooooooooo cuuuuuuuuuuuute

here's mine he is no were near as cute though ;P


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Old 01-21-2010, 03:43 AM

Overall very nice. :3

I like the shading and your color schemes.


I do notice a trend tho. You seem to be going out of your way to hide your hands. @>@ I get the feeling that you aren't comfortable with them so you are going out of your way to cover them. I will admit next to feet hands are one of the hardest things to draw but they are good to learn.


As for specific critiques.

Images 1.

Nice color schemes and I like the outfit. The details in the straps on the pants are very nice. I'm impressed with your handy work on the buckles.
I think the eyes are a bit too far apart. They should only be one eye length apart from each other and right now they are at 1.5.
Also the neck may need to be lowered. Right now if I were to follow the flow of the neck it wouldn't naturally go to right shoulder.

#2
Very nice. The background amuses me. XD I especially like the face on the left. Thats a very hard angle to draw and it looks very nice there.

#3
I like it.
The body and face are really nice. It's a completely different style too which is a nice surprise. Its a very very nice realistic face. The laces on the shoes are also very nicely done. My only real beef is that you hid the hands. @>@

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Old 01-21-2010, 04:00 AM

Thank you sooooooo much I love your critiques and I'm going to apply them. I am okay with hand though I spend a ton of time on them here looki . . . thooooooough this isn't that great of a drawing.


I have a hard time making the hands big enough . . . I tend to draw them to small and you're right I am not that comfortable with them yet and I am really bad with feet:(

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Old 01-21-2010, 04:18 AM

Yay hands!

And no problem. Glad to help. :3

I really like his right hand. It's a hard pose to draw a hand in and you added the knuckles. Very nice.

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Old 01-21-2010, 04:25 AM

Thaaaaaaaaanks oh and here's a hand and feet



I really do need to work on my hands hahaha

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Old 01-22-2010, 01:51 PM

Did you use a photo reference for the third image? I'm just curious since it's so different in style than the rest of your work. Your other drawings have a few proportional flaws, such as too large heads or small hands but overall I think you have potential to become a good anime artist. Also, you draw cute clothes. I think the best thing you can do to improve is to observe lots of different references...from photography, art or real life. Absorb all information you can. Here's a good website to practice anatomy (WARNING! Contains nude, skinless 3D-models.):
Posemaniacs.com

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Old 01-23-2010, 10:39 AM

Nice, but the first ones head is werid, neck too long, chin to pointy for a girl

 


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