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Deletris 01-27-2010 05:47 PM

Critique my art :o
 
This ish Del's art:

http://i295.photobucket.com/albums/m...ossomtrees.jpg

http://i295.photobucket.com/albums/m...h_finshsai.jpg

Deletris's Gallery <-- my gallery ^^

I just want some opinions and ways to improve my work x3 I'm also thinking of opening an art shop *-* think anyone would be interested xD?

Edit: Click the thumbnails to enlarge i figured if i didn't keep them in thumbnail format they would take up at least half a page xD

Morbid_Silence 01-27-2010 06:41 PM

It's pretty good. Your anatomy however requires some work. All of your characters limbs look really long and stiff. Just keep drawing and eventually you'll get over that.
I love the designs and how you draw your clothing though. Very good. (:
Try doing some shading, or at least some more, in all of your drawings. Figure out where you want to put a light source and work it from there.
Hope that helps. :)

~Dark

Deletris 01-27-2010 07:05 PM

^^ thanks
Light source ;o I'm not great at that ^^;;
I've recently just got my tablet and these pieces of art are from a long time ago so that may help solve the shading issues x3


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