This is one of my first drawings that are not furries and have two people touching. Took two hours, but I'm still not completely happy with it. Thoughts?

I like his hat.

I see what you mean. Something does seem off about it. I'm afraid I can't put my finger on it though. v.v

On the other hand though, you have lovely, clean lines and use a fantastic variation of tone! It's very nice to look at.

Edit: Ah! I know what I like so much about it. It reminds me of stained glass, in a way. ^^

I think that its a really good drawing and I love the shading. Maybe it appears to not have enough shading..? I am not sure how it appears in your mind. I really think this is a great piece.

Try coloring it and see if it makes you happier. Usually when I draw something, i am not happy with it, but when it's colored, i'm actually satisfied enough. That may just be me though.

Thanks for the feedback. :)

I was looking at it more this morning and realized Nicki's (darker hair) hand is somewhat deformed.

Originally Posted by Louis duLac

I was looking at it more this morning and realized Nicki's (darker hair) hand is somewhat deformed.

That was my only biff with the piece. It's wonderful otherwise. Good job.

To better show the emotion I think the two should be agents each other since one already has a hold on the others face while the second is pulling the fist but not together? I think if the first has a face that show they want to be close they would have already closed the gap between them.

Drawing wise it's pretty~ but the legs seem a lot less detailed- they need some loving too~! Pants have side seems so maybe a slightly wiggling line down the side of their paints to show wrinkles and leg shape.