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Old 04-07-2010, 11:43 PM

I made these earlier this week.... But i need some advice from other people. What do you think? These were done on photoshop... Sorry about the size of them ^^



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Old 04-08-2010, 11:01 AM

Ooh very cute! The only thing I notice is that perhaps you could make the lines smaller and thinner.. and less sketchy.. and also line the hair.. or don't line at all? ^^

But very nice chibi's!

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Old 04-08-2010, 02:45 PM

I recognize the top one :'o

Your line work and strokes in general need to be cleaner though. I don't know what you're using but back when I was using a mouse I'd zoom into the picture really far for maximum control. That might help you out a bit.

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Old 04-08-2010, 09:03 PM

i have no problem with the sketchy part, but if your working in photoshop, mabe you should try using more layers. If you want to keep working in that rough kind of way, you could make one layer for the lineart and then working the color in other layer and the shadows in another. You should also try aplying some textures above everithing.

This is a rough example:

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Old 04-09-2010, 02:33 AM

Those are super adorable!

One thing though, what tools are you using to draw the outline? Because, it's kind of sketchy but the rest of the style and coloring is smooth so it doesn't go so well together.

If you haven't considered yet, there is something called the Pen tool in photoshop. It's a bit confusing at first to learn but it makes lines smooth and it's a common tool used for line art in manga. :) If you want look up a tutorial on deviant art or i could show you how to use it.

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Old 04-10-2010, 11:02 PM

Thanks for the advice! I'll try to improve those things next time I draw :)

 


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