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Old 09-04-2010, 01:39 AM

So! Hello and thank you everyone who is going to help me on this (^o^)/

In a few weeks is one of my friend's birthday and since he's living in another country is kinda hard for me to get him a gift. I've been thinking to make him something i can deiver via internet and the only thing that came in my mind was an art piece of his avatar. Since is for his birthday I can't just sketch somethig on a paper and there you go, so I've been working on the piece for a while. I finaly finished it but somehow is not done yet in my eyes.

Any little detail you guys migh think is necessary to add / change is welcome! Please make this the best present ever xD

Here is what I have so far:


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Old 09-04-2010, 06:04 AM

There's not really much that needs to be changed. The values and placement are all fairly nice. I like the sunset of the background and the simplicity of the wood structure behind the character. The tear gives some personality to it all and is done well. :)

The only thing that really stands out to me is the hand. Those are always hard! I think the thumb and fingers are sticking too far out from the wrist, so I'd move them so the wrist is more inline with them. If that doesn't look right, then the perspective of the wrist might need to be changed. If that's the case then I would make it so the veins don't really show.

This might just be me, put I'm wondering if the sword is aligned correctly on both sides?

One last thing, The cut where the clothing is frayed, I'd add more blood to it, or I'd put a bandage there too. It seems funny that the character would bandage his chest and not his side if it's a fresh wound!

I hope I helped and that your friend likes it!

 


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