critique?
 

well its not my newest work but its one of my favorites

serenity by ~ewinxr on deviantART

http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs71/f/20...xr-d31bk2h.png

thoughts and critique??

hopefully i will be getting a new tablet soon because mine is broken and doesnt draw clean lines :<

ps. its supposed to look like a sketch

well if you want really really clean lines use pen tool (if your in photoshop) it does wonders,
I really like your colouring however what does seem off is the arms (they look extremely thin) and you can hardly see a nose but as i said i am super envious of your colouring skills

It's all about style really, so you don't have to pay any heed to this. But the junction between the hair line and the eyebrow could use a bit more space while the neck could be slightly thicker. The shoulders are offset, they could be balanced so the collarbone doesn't look like it's sticking out. Perhaps move her eyes slightly (very slightly) closer together so the side aren't touching the outline of her face. Other than that, it's fairly nice.

A very pretty picture this is indeed. I agree with what ccmemories said but I also believe the are a little on the skinny side.

It's absolutely beautiful. Your coloring is - well, I'm jealous! Too pretty.

Because everyone else has covered what I saw - arms, shoulder, etc - I'll assume this was intended stylistically. One thing you could do is give her a bit more forehead - at least the same as the distance between the eyebrow and the eye, if you need some help figuring that out :)

I love the eloquence of a long neck. <3

Critique me back, please?

Thank you every one for you input.. i smiled while reading these :D