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Old 12-24-2010, 04:54 AM



Lol, fail. Oh, well. I tried. :XD It's been years since I've drawn something and I've decided to start practicing, again.

Critiques would be greatly appreciated! :heart:

And also, please suggest any references (books, websites, yada yada) for clothing and inanimate objects. :XD I obviously fail at those, but I'm dyin' to improve!

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Edit:

Whoops, I accidentally deleted the old picture. :gonk: BUT I have a new one for you fellas to critique. It's the first time I've used a digital media and it took me three days of sitting down and reading CG tutorials. Uuuuugh. Hopefully it turned out fine. -too exhausted to tell- Your thoughts?


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Old 12-27-2010, 01:02 AM

when ever i need references i usually hit up DA (be it tutorials or just other pieces of art/photos) also for some reason the anatomy seems a little funny it might just be because of her neck, if you want i can help you with a red line, but i don't know if you want me to

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Old 12-27-2010, 08:57 AM

fail? The detail and shading is awesome! I love all the detail, her expression, how shiny her hair is XD I think she does like a tiny bit square which is probably the anatomy that zebra touched on. Really if you brought that nice rounded shading from under the bust line up a little more to make the tits a bit more round it would really take off that masculine feel. I think that all it would need though! Even your collar bones and ears are really good (the two things I fail at) You should do a colored one on unlined paper >.<

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Old 12-28-2010, 03:27 AM

I'm currently in a quest for unlined paper. :XD All my sketchbooks are hidden in boxes in the garage. BUT I just went to a bookstore today and picked up some books on drawing and colored pencils. c: So I'll start practicing, maybe work on realism some. (And I'll definitely work on that anatomy! Darn body parts! >: o )

But thank you both for the reviews and advice~ :heart: I really appreciate it. :)

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Old 01-01-2011, 09:20 PM

very awesome!! :D

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Old 01-14-2011, 03:58 AM

Critique my new post, please? :D

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Old 01-18-2011, 03:41 PM

You have a nice picture there! For critic I would say do some more shading. Its good on her dress, but some of the other shading is getting lost and the hair could use some shading and highlights.
Other then that, I like it a lot. =3

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Old 01-25-2011, 06:24 PM

Everything on her is just adorable, but I really love how you did her hair in particular :) The fairy-cut top turned out great, too! I really have nothing much to critique here, you're awesome xD

Critique me back, please?

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Old 01-25-2011, 10:33 PM

OOOooo nice new picture, I love the coloring and the expression, she's really adorable. :) Hmm as for CC I honestly don't see anything wrong with it other than the right hand. The right hand looks a bit smudged in, I think the best way to fix that is to look at your self in the mirror and try and play with the pose a bit and get a feel for what the hand might look like in that pose. Again awesome job I really love your new drawing. :D

 


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