The mouth is actually fine. So you're good! The main throw-off is the nosebridge, which is shaded a bit too narrow and tall for the perspective you're going for. Also in accordance to perspective, the eye's elongated as if you can see the character's entire face, rather than the 3/4 view you want.
Hope you don't mind that I redlined your piece. If you would, use it as a guideline and apply your own style. :) happy drawing, mate