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Lexadis 07-16-2011 06:14 AM

Back to pixelling and mene after a long time =]
 
And I srsly missed it ;_;

but now I'm back! Anyway, I was just a new member here, and then I just.. disappeared. So, anyway, I thought I would re-edit an old doll to a new one, and here goes:

http://i53.tinypic.com/r9j289.jpg

Rate, critique, needs a little improvement? State it!
Thank you =3



Credits:
Base: mariiii
Hair and skirt tut followed: mariiii
Pallette: mariiii

WinglessFairy 07-20-2011 08:05 PM

ooooh cute! =D

diave 08-07-2011 09:35 AM

Oooh nice! I love the colors and the skirt a lot. The hair is nice but I think it would be even better if the thick lines in between sections weren't as thick as the outside lines, because it makes the hair overall look a bit flat and pieced on if that makes sense.

WherededIGo 08-07-2011 10:25 AM

Aww, that is soo good! I'm jealous! I agree with Diave though, thinner lines should be used for parting the hair.
A good choice of colours!

Krissy 08-08-2011 08:06 AM

I think innner outline of the hair looks a bit blocky in the curved part of the pony tail. If you allow me, I can circle the area I think stands out. I don't wanna "edit" the doll without your permission, even though it's just going to be some circling on the hair just to show you where I see it standing out. ^^ If not, that's fine. But that's the only thing that really sticks out to me as something that could be just a bit improved.

But otherwise, it looks really good. Especially if you took a break from pixeling. It can be rather hard trade to get back into at times.


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