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Pistachio_Moustache 05-15-2014 03:18 PM

PiM!'s Art Dump
 
I will be just posting random stuff I draw.
Commissions, doodles, the like.

:D

Pistachio_Moustache 05-15-2014 03:19 PM

Here's Reiko, my OC that I have been working on.
It's the lineart right now, I'm colouring her~
Oh, this is the old wip, I made some changes.
xD
http://i.imgur.com/oGAopBF.png
New Wip:
http://i.imgur.com/7UfhZSJ.png

Uniplex 05-15-2014 05:53 PM

Dang good drawings PiM!

Pistachio_Moustache 05-16-2014 12:13 AM

Oh, thanks~!
I'm not the best, //coughIrocoughIgorcough
xD

But lucky me, I have three real life commissions!
xDD

Pistachio_Moustache 05-26-2014 10:12 AM


Pistachio_Moustache 05-30-2014 01:13 PM

http://i.imgur.com/KzcOURj.png
Current wip of new character.
xD

Pistachio_Moustache 06-04-2014 02:22 PM


~LONGCAT~ 06-09-2014 12:11 AM

PiM These are great!! If you take crits I'd be happy to point a few things out for you. Nothing mean I promise! :3

Pistachio_Moustache 06-12-2014 06:07 PM

~LONGCAT~: Do it! :D
I'm alright with criticism; it helps me grow as an artist~
Note: I am fixing his boot.
xD

~LONGCAT~ 06-20-2014 01:08 AM

Ok, here goes.
Your perspective could use some work. Your legs end in 2d flat feet. Take a loook in shoe adverts or browse shoe stores to get an idea of tue general shape and angles. Same goes for your hands, while they are well drawn and proportional they show some odd traits thT natural hands dont posesses. Esp. In the female drawing. Her flat hand is too flat, even when held in a similar position, it cups.
Your lines ar nice and crisp and read very well. And you do really good expressions for the face. I like the method you usefor coloring.
Overall i think your art could benefit just from using models or stock images. You have a good base to work with, so it wont be reinventing your style, which i do like, its just little touches that will overall make things better. :3

---------- Post added 06-20-2014 at 01:09 AM ----------

Ps. If you need any clarification, ping me back in. I tried typing this all out on my tablet.

Pistachio_Moustache 06-20-2014 05:29 PM

Thank you for the crit~
I will work on hands and feet some more.
I used to not draw feet, because I wasn't very good at them.
I will post more wips soon.

Pistachio_Moustache 09-05-2014 02:40 AM

I will be making more art soon~!
:D

~LONGCAT~ 09-20-2014 02:28 AM

Good. Make more art! :3 The only art I have been working on is for work.

Pistachio_Moustache 09-23-2014 07:05 PM

Just drew this in like ten minutes.
It's a bit cruddy, but oh well.

I'm trying a different technique.
http://i.imgur.com/FeHIp0x.png

Pistachio_Moustache 09-24-2014 07:19 AM


Pistachio_Moustache 10-04-2014 02:00 AM


Pistachio_Moustache 10-06-2014 01:51 AM

Finished for Kat~
http://i.imgur.com/MYmrau6.png
~LONGCAT~: Feedback?
:D

I PINGED THE WRONG CAT

~LONGCAT~ 10-06-2014 02:18 AM

That's ok XD
Still want feed back on it?

Pistachio_Moustache 10-06-2014 03:12 AM

~LONGCAT~: I pinged the wrong cat first, then I fixed it to ping you.
xD

Yes, I would still appreciate feedback.
I think I borked the shading.
D:

~LONGCAT~ 10-06-2014 03:36 AM

The clothing is a little stiff, esp near the armpit and shoulders.
http://i.imgur.com/qihyeib.png
Take a look at this jacket and see where it bunches and pulls. And what shapes the bunches and folds make. It's not always V's sometimes it's rhomboid. The shirt should have some pulls and folds too. and additional shading, but I'll talk shading in a bit. The pants need folds as well. crotch areas are full of folds and stretches in the fabic. Don't be scared to stare at crothces!! :P
Your perspective is really good. I love how the shoulders are angled and how the arms bend. Just very organic movement there.
The shading. I like the block/cell shadin It's nice crisp lines and simple. There are some places that require more shading or at least a darker shading. The inside shirt needs more as does the inside of the jacket. The shading doesn't match the highlights.
http://i.imgur.com/SSpxbE4.png
When I'm doing pixels or coloring things I draw in where the light source is so I can keep highlights and shadows consistent.

Overall, It's cute. and you have good lines. Once you get the shading down the whole thing is gonna come together nice!

Pistachio_Moustache 10-06-2014 03:40 AM

OH SHOT

I forgot to add wrinkles to the shirt.
Fudgemuffins.
I knew I wasn't finished.
Snap.
Dx

Oh well, it was a freebie.
ALL IN THE NAME OF PRACTICE

I'm going to have to start adding a light source, because I forget sometimes.
xD

~LONGCAT~ 10-06-2014 04:03 AM

I forget all the time. It's awful when I forget and put the light source on the other side because Mene's light comes from the Avi's right. And I end up having to redo everything! I have to draw in little suns. :D


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