Yarrr ... so now i like drawing and coloring in oekaki.
And i've made a couple of stuff to practice.
Some of these were made for the draw the avatar above you thread. *O*

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And the newest:




Soo ... what do you think about them ?
comments ?
c.c ?

Also ... would you buy this ?

i like how disturbing they are
the blank expressions and the huge empty eyes
i'd buy from you if you had a shop, though i don't know about pricing
i am not very familiar with the economy here

Idont like them lol sorry but they are kinda ugly and you say you purposly make them like that but you could just be covering up the fact that you are a horrible artisst.

Thanks Magaly ... o 3o

@Rawr: Wtf ... where do i say make them "ugly" on purpose ? ... quote me please. Also how is this constructive critisism ? ... Tell me how to make them better or something.

um...yeah...I like thier experssions...but it's kind of...okay...in a way... :?: :?: :?:

Ok ... so i need more practice .. damn practice ! xD

What do i need to get better at ? ... everything ? xD;

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Uh ... ok O-o;

Yay for you ... and that was kinda... spam.

I like your technique, and honestly, it's very hard to color and draw (from scratch) on the computer even with a tablet.

I like the first one posted the best. But I think you need to consider the principles of the left eye. A human has two eyes (proven fact) so if you'd like to hide it, at least add hair to cover it completely or leave gaps and then shade it with a shadow color. But I suggest you draw the left eye.

For the rest of the pictures, I suggest you fix the pupils. It's kind of odd to see stars as pupils UNLESS you are doing some expression like being inlove and so on and so forth. But it does not show, I also suggest that you fix the coloring a bit. ^^

But so far so good, I'd probably do worse in oekaki. ^^

Thanks. :]

Do you think the thick lines as lineart look better than the sketch-like ones ? D: Im really messy when it comes to the lineart.

Also ... i did the eye thing on purpose, because i was lazy. xD
And the pupil thing ... because they are zombeh people ! ... or something...

What would you recomend on the coloring ? o 3o

• Rawrr__x, what the hell ?
  
  Moon, I think those are cool. Just like Magaly said, they have a disturbed look about them that's out of the norm of all the cutesy chibis we see on these kinds of sites.

Thick lines aren't really presentable when doing art like yours. I suggest thin lines or rather, no lines at all. Though Line art helps in coloring. So sketchy lines it is. ^^

Oh...zombies. xD

Thanks Danneh :]

Yeah ... crazy color haired zombies * O* I've been wanting to try not using any line art on the finished work, so i guess i'll try that someday. . . i bet it's hard. D:

Originally Posted by Moon

Ok ... so i need more practice .. damn practice ! xD

What do i need to get better at ? ... everything ? xD;

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No you are doing fine, just add a little bit more happy experssions in thier eyes, that would make it look a little bit more better~~! :D You don't have to be perfect at verything, no one in this world is perfect anyway~~! Not even me! :D