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Bleeding Black Rose 04-09-2007 12:27 AM

Constructive Criticism? Black Rose needs help.
 
Here are two sketch artworks I have done this year.

Currently, I have this dillema of opening a sketch shop in Menewsha. ^^;

I also want to improve a lot and these two are the most recent so I appreciate some advise. ^^

oh and if you want to see my latest CGS it's in my deviant:

http://katrinamap.deviantart.com

images:
Mowse in Gaia
Couple sketch of avatar's self and boyfriend in Gaia

Bleeding Black Rose 04-09-2007 01:39 AM



I'll be adding some more when I get the inspiration to draw. xD


Moon 04-09-2007 01:46 AM

I think the sketches are a little too dark.
Maybe making it lighter in some photo editing program ?

But other than that, they are pretty good. :]

Tisiel 04-09-2007 02:08 AM

I quite like them. But I agree with Moon, they could use with a little lightening. I think they would sell though. Good luck! :)

Classical 04-09-2007 03:02 AM

i also agree that its a bit darm
maybe make the main lines darker
and lighten parts such as the wings o wo
they're nice <33

Bleeding Black Rose 04-09-2007 03:19 AM

Well I kind of adjusted the contrast too much I guess. O-O;

But I will make them lighter in shading next time. ^^ Thank you.

So you guys really think they'd buy? xD;

Bleeding Black Rose 04-10-2007 02:59 AM

So shading that's it? O.O;


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