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Old 04-11-2007, 03:44 PM




Yay! It's done!
This pic was quite the pain in the butt to color, but it was worth it. This one isreally looks good.

I like how the eyes turned out, sprshaly Shinji's eyes. Well, Shinji as a hole turn out better then I could have ever hoped.
I have a few peroblems with Asuka, but she turned out good too. Some day I might make this into a wallpaper, but for now this is good enuff.

I find the part about Angel's in the song quite funny.
The "Angel"s and the Angel's in the song are soooo unlike.
x D
Anyway, here is the words to the song. I still think it apropreat for both of them.

The Light in your Eyes
By: LeeAnn Rimes


Life can take your dreams and turn them upside down
Friends will talk about you when you're not around
Reality can really cut you down to size
But don't ever lose that light in your eyes
Don't ever lose that light in your eyes

People make you promises they'll never keep
Soon you'll know why people say talk is cheap
And life resembles one big compromise
But don't ever lose that light in your eyes

Keep on shining
Don't lose faith and don't lose heart
When you're crying
Just keep trying to remind yourself
you're a shining star
Yes you are

Somewhere down the line you'll face the judgement day
When the angels look at you, what will they say?
They've got a way of knowing who qualifies
Just let 'em see that light in your eyes

Don't ever lose that light in your eyes
Keep on smiling
Keep on shining
Don't lose faith and don't lose heart
When you're crying
Just keep trying to remind yourself you're a shinging star
Yes you are

Don't ever lose that light in your eyes
Don't ever lose that light in your eyes
Don't ever lose ...
Don't ever lose ...

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Old 04-11-2007, 03:55 PM

WOW i like that ! Its cute and WOW beautifull I LOVE IIIIT REALLY i want i can so good make arts :|

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Old 04-13-2007, 04:03 AM

Cute pic! I'd try using a bit of line weight [thinner lines where the light hits, thicker where there is shadow], and most importantly, lay off the 'Burn and Dodge' tools. xD This is probably more personal opinion, but dodge and burn shades far too brightly, and it doesn't look as great as manually shading it. Yes, it may take a bit longer, but it'll look better.

Hope that helps. :]


-Moki

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Old 04-13-2007, 04:08 PM

That picture is soooo good! I like the art as well. The CG looks fine to me...there's nothing wrong with it...but I really like the artwork! Actually I love it! Sorry, I tend to say random things...-.-. Good job though, keep up the good work! And Good luck! A little comment from me~~!!! :D

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Old 04-13-2007, 09:35 PM

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Originally Posted by Mokibus
Cute pic! I'd try using a bit of line weight [thinner lines where the light hits, thicker where there is shadow], and most importantly, lay off the 'Burn and Dodge' tools. xD This is probably more personal opinion, but dodge and burn shades far too brightly, and it doesn't look as great as manually shading it. Yes, it may take a bit longer, but it'll look better.

Hope that helps. :]


-Moki
Thank you, that does help.
The only thing I used dodge and burn on wast the eyes (which I admit I went overboard on) and the waves in the hair.


@ChibiMaru-Chan: Thank you. <3

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Old 04-13-2007, 09:41 PM

The shading in Asuka's hair seems really strange, but overall its really cute!

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Old 04-13-2007, 11:02 PM

I really like the eyes... The hair might be a bit over hilited, but it's no biggy.

 


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