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zeroSenshi12 04-12-2007 11:21 PM

Suggestions Wanted, please. ^^
 
Hey all!~ zero has some arts to show you! XP I love typing/speaking in the third person.

Any-hoo, I need some suggestions on proportions and feet. I'm horrible at feet! ^^;;

And does anyone know a good way to shade/color that isn't on the computer? (zero only has mapcolors. And she's not very good with those.)

Anyway, here are the pictures!

(I did this one just yesterday. I hope you all don't mind that it's a Gaian avatar... ^^;; ) Sometimes I sense an extreme dislike to Gaia (site, not people) from some people... ^^;; I don't want to anger anyone.
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a32...aballpoint.jpg

And here's the colored version of that picture: X

Also, an OC:

http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a32...12/zerossa.jpg

[Amphorae] 04-12-2007 11:38 PM

As far as anatomy, you're excellent! Practice a bit on your faces though (they're still good!). :] Love it.

zeroSenshi12 04-12-2007 11:39 PM

Thanks! I was planning on drawing more tonight, but I had an allergic reaction to something and my hands are swollen. Right when I had inspiration to draw!

[Amphorae] 04-12-2007 11:41 PM

Oh! I hope you're okay! That really sucks though.. :\ I hope you get better soon.

Mokibus 04-13-2007 03:45 AM

I feel bad for critiquing something complete, but here goes.

Did you make the lines on the face before drawing in the eyes and nose and such? It seems a bit skewed (particularly the mouth), so I'd probably do that in a near future. Also, the ponytail looks a bit too chunky.

For the skirt, I'd look at this tutorial on folds. I think you'll find it very useful.

Bodywise, her neck is a tad too thin and long. Her stretched-out leg is also a little too long compared to the other leg.

That's about it. Hope that helps! :]


-Moki

zeroSenshi12 04-13-2007 03:23 PM

Thanks for the help! I'll check that tutorial out. ^^ Don't feel bad about critiquing anything. I asked for it. XP It was really helpful, too.

^^;; I actually started with the eyes. I know you're not particularly supposed to do that, but the eyes were the first thing I learned how to draw. Although... the eyes on those two pictures were not my best.

ChibiMaru-Chan 04-13-2007 05:16 PM

I think it looks good. I really like how you made the body.
It's okay if you can't do the feet...I think it looks fine.
Keep up with good work!
:D
A little comment from me~~! :D

zeroSenshi12 04-15-2007 08:23 PM

Thank you all very much for the comments. My hands aren't swollen anymore, and I'm going to check that tutorial right after I post this.


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