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04-19-2007, 12:01 PM
I'm pretty new here... something like 20 minutes new lol
I figured I post somewhere where I'm more familiar with... the art forums.
I'll go ahead and post a piece I've been working on for a while. Let me know what you think or what could be improved on.
I still need to draw the other hand haha.
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Hatch
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04-19-2007, 03:16 PM
Nice, I like the way that you have the skeletal structure. And the spear through the head is a welcome touch ^_^
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04-19-2007, 04:55 PM
Thanks for the comment.
I could use a lot of work on the body of the skeleton actually. There's a couple of major mistakes that I made that stand out like a sore thumb to me, but it's still in it's begining stages. After working on it for a week. I though it best if I leave it alone for a while and then come back to it. A while became a week, a week became a month, and a month became two months lol.
If I don't fininish anytime soon, I don't think I'll ever finish it lol.
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04-19-2007, 04:59 PM
It's original and it looks sweet, some color could help thought but besides that its a great skull.
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Mad Hatter
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04-19-2007, 05:23 PM
I can see a few mistakes in the anatomy of the skeleton (assuming its a human =p) but those few are outweighed by the skill of the peice.
Its nicely done I want to see the finished version. :P
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04-19-2007, 06:37 PM
Thanks for the comments everyone. :o
Mad Hatter: Yeah, I had a lot of trouble with the collar bone and the ribs the most. I know the neck is also just a tad bit off. I'll figure a way to mask that though lol. Maybe some dynamic coloring skills would draw the attention away from the mistakes LOL.
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Kasimir De
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04-20-2007, 09:35 AM
Interesting~ :o
Anyway, is that a cloth or a smoke that comes out from the skull? If it's a smoke then I think the edge maybe a bit too sharp that to me it looks more like a piece of cloth. :? It may be better to fade out the edge of the smoke on the top to make it look like it really fades into the air.
Just my opinion~
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04-20-2007, 09:56 AM
Hm, that is a pretty impressive piece you got there~
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04-20-2007, 10:02 AM
Kasimir De: It's suppose to be smoke, but I actually like your idea way better. Thanks for the great input.
I'll probably fix a lot of the mistakes when I color it. It was drawn with PaintShopPro so... a lot of those mistakes made are easily fixed. ;)
Sethirius: Thank you. ^^
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Lehila
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06-16-2007, 08:27 PM
WOW *_*
just wow, really. i'm in love with it *prints it out and puts on the wall* <3
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Caeluma
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06-16-2007, 10:04 PM
creepy!
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06-16-2007, 11:17 PM
- I think you did an excellent job on the skull.
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Lady Mikira
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06-19-2007, 05:04 PM
OMG...That is amazing. I love it.
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06-19-2007, 05:53 PM
great job, you are very talented! I love the skull.
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06-20-2007, 02:13 AM
The details in the spear and skull are amazing but your body needs more work. I think a good work over and then a good clean up with nice lines will defiantly help. :) Good luck.
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