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[ [ b a c k . t o. b a s i c s ] ] ~ fei's gall3rii.
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so here we go~~ |
here's the first one.
i started &&finished today. http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v3...ku/130507x.jpg |
*could i post?*
ohhh... nice doodle.. but i think you're not that confident in drawing hands? i was like that when i first started but then i realized it won't help me to learn how to draw them if i always keep them covered... so i've always tried to draw those hands and feet since then.. <3 |
yeah, feel free to post =P
haha.. oh no no.. i can draw hands.. i just wanted to do a.. back to basics kind of drawing.. where its sketchy and like no hands or feet. |
ohhh... hehe... sorry.. my bad.. XP
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nono. its fine, i enjoy any kind of critique ^^
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ohh, very cutee and niceee drawing!
i loveee it. :3 well.. except for how her legs are like how they are. :S otherwise, i love it. xD <33333 |
nice ^_^ I have seen you on Zan!
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nice :3 maybe you should think about art shop? ;)
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i have opened onee~~!! |
hm.. lineart of something im working on~~
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/1...hylinexla4.jpg garghghgarrgg!! yes i know the top is weirdd n boobs are funkyy~~ |
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As for the latest pic, I'd say you need to watch the facial features for a bit. For example, her eye on our left is too far from the center of the face, considering this is a straight frontal view of her face, the eyes should be apart about the width that can fit another eye in between that space and located at the same level, which is another problem for the mentioned eye since it's also a little too high compare the other.
Also, I think it might be better the make the beginning of the eyebrows closer to where the nose bridge starts because with the problem above, it looks like her eyebrow on the left is missing to me =w=;; This one I don't really want to be nitpicky about since it's probably your style, but I'd suggest you to move the mouth up for a bit. Just make sure at least there's equal space between nose-mouth and mouth to chin. Right now with the space between nose-mouth is quite longer than mouth-chin, her face looks kinda funny to me ^^;;; ....I should stop now before you'll chop my head off >_>;;; You made a good use of colors by the way but if you will let me, I have a few suggestions to make it kinda more realistic if you want. ^^;;; |
hehe~ thank youu~~~
and yeah.. my eyes always tend to be a bit too far from each other.. -__-'' i dont know why.. they just end up that way o_o; |
Wow. o.o I love your style of coloring! especially how you did the water in the second piece.
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<3 You're welcome.
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