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Art >:3
I think this is the only good drawing I have drawn in a good while.
And I was hoping to get some advice or comments on it^^ This was drawn for my friend on Gaia. I had used my gaian signature heh. http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y22...y1101/lynn.jpg i do believe I drew the legs too short. I haven't drawn a full body in a long time lol and the neck may be too long. |
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You pay close attention to details ^^.
What you might want to work on is the proportions of people. Right now, her body is too small for her head, and her neck is a tad-bit long (though it is anime, which has a tendency to have long-necked people...). Keep practicing, and I'm sure you'll get the hang of it ^^. |
Thank you^^
yes I had noticed once i finished that her neck was too long lol. I stink at proportions but I shall keep practicing^^ Thanks again^^ |
You're very welcome. = 3
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I will probablly have another drawing tomorrow cause I always draw mine in school when I'm bored lol |
Heh. School is the best place for drawing ever. x3
'Specially during boring classes, like physics.... |
I think the neck is a little too long. Also the coat is a little odd. Making it thicker thank the skin would be good. (I sorry confusing wording, just don't use the same line of the arm for the jacket) The ORLY hat seems slightly squished on her head, maybe make it a little bigger? Uhm the hair needs more texture-oid thing. (It needs other lines to show some strands is basicaly what I'm saying) Also I think the feet may be a tad small. >___>; I hope that helped a little.
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Yes that helps alot Ari^^
Thank you for your input. I shall remember for my next drawing^^ |
I think it looks very nice. The neck is a tad to long but I do that all the time. Nice job.
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well, first off, great start. Second, I say you should head in the way of proportions. your body is a bit too long for the entire picture, and the head is just a tad big. also, work on getting a good style of nose.
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Indeed. Work those porportions!
I think you'll get them quickly: you already have the bear-bones of them going. You have the classical style of 7-8 heads tall with a three-head torso, but some of the more minute distances need adjusting, like -- as some others said -- the neck length, or foot-to-head ratio, or possibly even the width of hips to the width of shoulders. but all things must start somewhere, and you've got the starting block set. I think you'll improve rapidly, when you work on it. |
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