Looking for suggestions and comments?
 

I'm not really all that great at anime/manga style art, but I thought I'd give it a try, using some Menewsha characters I've seen around the site.

I love suggestions. Something I should change, something I should work on. Just yanno, don't be rude about it. =)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v1...adshotmene.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v1...eadshot2-1.jpg

they are very nice! I'd like to see them coloured!Sorry I am not god with suggestions.

I love the expression on the second one.

I think in the first one you should do something with the mouth, it's almost unnoticeable. O_O But the hair and hairpin on that one is great.

Your art is wonderful. I love the expressiveness of it. Very nice job.