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Ren's Art Gallery- UPDATED regularly^^
Here are some of my works. Feel free to comment and critique. Thanks!!
UPDATE New works: http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i1...Angelscopy.jpg http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i1...Teamcopy-1.jpg http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i1...zulandSadi.jpg Those are my Original Characters^^ Hope you like them! Also, if you're interested, I accpet commissions but only commissions on Menewsha avatars. So If you like me to draw your avatar, feel free to ask. IMPORTANT: I moved the commission thingy on the art shop so visit me there if you're interested If you're interested, check out my deviantART account and check my gallery so you could evaluate me. Thanks a lot!! |
:D your art is SO nice! ^_^
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Thank you so much! :wink:
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Ohmygosh! Pokemon people! They look soooo cool!! X3 Hahahha. Your art is really amazing. I don't know what to critique about it. ^^;; I would SO be buying avi art...if you know, my avi had clothes. xD Why do the art shoppes have to be so good? It just makes me want to hurry up and get some clothes for the sake of buying avi art. xDD |
Oh I love it! I'd like to do the one for 80g. -sends a pm-
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Your art is really nice! Only thing that bugs me, is that some of noses are a bit too long for the faces. T-T One some, they look ok, but, others, the noses look very awkward. O_O;;;
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I agree with linkfreak131, the nose is.....actually not too long, but is located too low consider from where the bridge begins. I'd suggest moving the beginning of the bridge in all pics except the first one up to about the mid of the eyes level then that would look better.
Also, it maybe better for you to study a bit more of anatomy. In the first and second pic, the characters both dress in tight fit costume and it the costume like that, you basically shaded the costume as how the shadow on naked body should be but I have to admit I found a few spots that should have shadow but instead you left it bright or doesn't have enough intensity of shadow as it should be ^^;; The other thing that bugs me is how the arm on the right of the girl in 3rd pic is, I think it's almost impossible for her to completely hide the upper arm that there's hardly any part visible behind the forearm like that, despite the fact that the forearm is blocking the upper arm. Consider the size the upper arm should be from how big the upper on the left is, we should be able to see a part of upper on the side that is next to the body. Let's say a part of the upper arm should be visible and blocking some part of the pocket and the ring thing on the jacket. *nods nods* And last thing about the 3rd pic, watch the shadow on her abs ^^;;; It's on the incorrect direction; while the whole pic shows that the light is coming from the right and casts shadow to the left side, yet how you shade the abs is exactly the same as how you shaded in 4th pic which is light is coming from the left. I hope I don't sound too nitpicky and also that those could help ^^;;; |
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The plant girl's left (her right) arm looks like it has a giant growth coming out of it, instead of a flower. The blue one is the only indication that it's supposed to be a plant. The poses are neat, pretty stuff, but the eyes are soulless and scary. |
Thank you so much for the constructive criticisms. I really appreciate it. I know it's for me to further improve myself. Thanks so much!!!!
Anymore critiques? I'll gladly accpet them. Thank you guys!!! And also for those who voted and really appreciates my art |
wow. Just, wow. You're a fantastic artist. The coloring and shading is great, and I love the way you draw your eyes and smiles. ^^ The oc's are very original as well. They all seem as though they've know one another for a long time, and are quite content in their own little group!
However, you may want to experiment with a different range of emotions. All I really saw was smiles, or joyful expressions. Other expressions (anger, confusion, sadness, etc.) tell alot more about your character. Unless they're always smiling, of course! ;D |
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I'm going to update this soon^^ |
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