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migratory bird 06-17-2007 02:01 PM

Don't eat me, plz? XD
 
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b1...tle/ribbon.jpg

I have an aversion to rude critiques, but the other kinds--the helpful ones--those are nice. :3
I think I need to round out his thighs a little?

Julianna 06-17-2007 02:03 PM

well, i don't have any critiques or any helpful suggestions..
but i can say that your drawing is super cuteee!
actually the hand seems a bit odd,
but i'm a horrible person to ask for useful suggestions.

lets just say your drawing is great.
i lovee the little stars on the shirt too. (:
<333

migratory bird 06-17-2007 02:06 PM

My hands are always odd, I give up on getting them right by the time the paper starts tearing I've erased so often. XDDD But at least you think it's cuuuute~ that makes me happy. ^3^

Akemi 06-17-2007 02:43 PM

It's an adorable sketch. <3

Here's the main things I can help with:
-the right hand is too wide
-there should be more room at the elbow where the left arm crosses the right, so it looks like it's resting on something.
-the mouth should be centered under the nose

I don't think the thighs need to be rounded... Though if he's not sitting, the thighs should be longer or the knees should be further down.


I do love all the little details, like the hairclips, the stars, and the design on the pants. You have a really cute style :D

Caeluma 06-17-2007 06:20 PM

very cool ^_^ the hand it kinda weird looking nut it's better then what I can do so I can't complain sorry I am not good critiques

Julianna 06-17-2007 08:02 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by migratory bird
My hands are always odd, I give up on getting them right by the time the paper starts tearing I've erased so often. XDDD But at least you think it's cuuuute~ that makes me happy. ^3^

ahha, its okay!
it just makes it look cutee.
i'm glad i made you happy. :3
<33333

Lady Mikira 06-19-2007 04:58 PM

OMG That is sooo cute! I love it. I wish I could draw like that....-.-


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