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Little_Ai 08-21-2007 12:28 PM

working on thsi for some one on gaia
 
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/b...s/PICT0065.jpg

chibi_glitter 08-21-2007 08:10 PM

it's so cute!!!

Nathuram 08-21-2007 08:20 PM

Looks good :] I just have a few critiques: The left arm seems much more thin than the right arm, the book (I assume it's a book she's carrying) seems like a piece a paper (add more depth to it, maybe?), and the neck seems a bit off.

Edit: You have a good sense of perception :] And anatomy.

Caeluma 08-22-2007 03:57 AM

ah thats so cute ^_^

Tre Le Coco 08-22-2007 05:14 AM

hey cutie pie, are you using a reference by any chance? ^^

Little_Ai 08-22-2007 09:33 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tre Le Coco
hey cutie pie, are you using a reference by any chance? ^^

i'm doign it all by hand just pencel and paper ^-^,
Nathuram: i'm still learning how to draw thing right, i know the left arm is thin i need to add to it slightly and i also know the book is thin right now but i can't work on the pic till i hear teh person to see what else they want done to it.

Equivalent Exchange 08-23-2007 02:27 AM

Her neck and shoulders are a little wonky. Like the neck is too long, and the shoulders are too low. I'm not a fan of huge eyes either, but that really depends on you.


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