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patchy 08-23-2007 05:59 AM

Shoujo style practice :O
 
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y92...arthmother.jpg


So yeah, I am not a traditional artist in any sense of the word and yet I still try. Maybe I just enjoy torturing myself XD

Any way, I call her "Earth Mother". I was thinking of lining and CGing her but I don't own a tablet and I suck at using the pen tool so thats out.

Any who, just tell me what you think and such :3

[edit]: I see that the hand is off, thank you XD
I got it ^^;;

The Silent Doll 08-23-2007 04:17 PM

Oh, wow, this is very pretty! I love the hand, and how you drew the eyes. The flowers also look quite nice.

I do like the hand but, I think maybe the one finger sticking up is a little too long? It might just be me. Other than that, everything looks great!

Moon 08-23-2007 06:01 PM

I love the face, especially the eyes.
It looks great.

And yeah ... I think the finger separate from the other is kinda too long. :O

Kaderin Triste 08-24-2007 12:02 AM

Wow, really great! The hand does seem a tad out of proportion though.

patchy 08-24-2007 01:35 AM

Thank you all and may I add that I see my mistake and that I don't need 6 other people commenting about it XD

Just saying, it gets repetitive ^^;;

Caeluma 08-24-2007 02:03 AM

very cool the fingers are so long and thin

Kaderin Triste 08-24-2007 02:15 AM

Yes, I can understand that and I apologize, but maybe you should edit your first post then to say that you know that the hand is off...then people will be less likely to point it out.

patchy 08-24-2007 02:54 AM

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Yes, I can understand that and I apologize, but maybe you should edit your first post then to say that you know that the hand is off...then people will be less likely to point it out.
It's alright ^^;; and I should have phrased that in a more polite manner maybe ^^;; But, again thank you for replying at all.

[edit]: heh ^^;; I accidentally hit edit instead of quote on your post, sorry about that.

kimu 08-24-2007 03:34 AM

Beautiful : D
But why does it look like it a lil fady? xD

mangacatgirl 08-24-2007 03:23 PM

I really like how the eyes and lips came out. I love the detail you put into them. The nose looks a bit odd to me, but then that could just be your style.

I really like the little flowers too.

I think if it's shoujo style you might not want such thick eyebrows?...

Even if the hand is a bit off I like how it came out. I like the nails too.

I'm torn on the hair... Something about it bothers me, but I'm not sure what it is...

Overall I'd say the piece is rather well done, though. So, good work.


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