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Old 10-08-2007, 06:04 PM

here he is:

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please critique?

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Old 10-08-2007, 06:17 PM

He's adorable=3 What program did you use to make it?
It looks like paint. If so you're very talent! O.o

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Old 10-08-2007, 06:45 PM

It is MS paint ^^ long live the the tablet and the curvy thingie!

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Old 10-08-2007, 06:46 PM

  • Looks pretty cool! (Nagas are half snake, yes?)

    *tries to think of constructive criticism* Hm, his head seems a little large in relation to his body - but then again, he could be a chibi or a young child? *unsure* I'm assuming he's leaning against something soft. The folds should be kind of extending away from him. He's leaning against it, so if he was to get up, you should see a dent in the fluff matter. *wonders if she makes any sense* @[email protected]; Hope that helps some?

    Anyways, nice picture! I like the profile and the smooth lineart. (I NEVER knew how to draw one pixel lineart D: ) :D

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Old 10-08-2007, 06:50 PM

*she makes sense*

Yeah, head indeed seems large. I always do that...
Thanks on the folds, I just cant draw those YET! I think we get some classes in that as well... Anyway thanks for the tips ^^ <3

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Old 10-09-2007, 01:16 AM

ah he is cute but what is he sitting on?

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Old 10-09-2007, 01:44 AM

Okay it seems as though almost everything I could comment on has been covered...but I think I might like to add that his nose is a little big for his face.. :? Hmm...anywhos Great job for a Paint program! I love how you used the spray can for the underside of his lower torso. Awesome work...but then again, I've kind of begun to expect that from you XDD
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Old 10-09-2007, 05:04 AM

Thank you very much Hatch. Oh, Am I becoming a famous artist here? :shock:

@Caeluma: a huuuuge pillow thingamaging.

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Old 10-09-2007, 11:41 AM

It looks really good. n__n

And amen for paint! It's the program I use for everything I pixel.

My only critique is the nose, I feel that it is way to big. Like, the majority of his face is nose.

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Old 10-11-2007, 06:29 AM

pretty great start! really clean too. although the only problem i would say is the proportion of his head to his body. it's too big compared to the rest of him.
hope that helped ^^

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Old 10-11-2007, 08:12 AM

  • Aside from the proportion problems, he's very adorable.

    But then again, it's a naga. Maybe nagas in your mind have overly large heads.

    That's the wonderful thing about drawing fantastical creatures. You can define them as you would like to.

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Old 10-12-2007, 02:36 AM

cool :shock:

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Old 10-12-2007, 11:22 PM

That's cool! The nose sticks out a little too much (I hate drawing noses for that reason) and the muscle on the inner arm looks a bit sharp. However, it's a lovely picture overall. I love the coloring on his tail and it's REALLY amazing considering you did it all in paint o_o.

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Old 10-12-2007, 11:29 PM

Why your art is really sweet. I like this naga very much. <33

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Old 10-12-2007, 11:57 PM

it looks really cool :] You have art with ms paint. Wow, haha ^^ if you ever have a shop and when i earn some gold i would so buy :] haha. Kay, *speachless. bye :]

 


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