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Old 10-13-2007, 12:59 AM

Here's 2 I did this morning. I'm wondering if anyone can give me a critique on what could be perfected? I know there are alot of mistakes, but hey, I tried. D:

~The following are pics of my NexusTK characters, please no stealing~

Ninja Pic:

Mistakes:

-Her wings are supposed to be darker then that, but I didn't have time to finish it. D:

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Tiger Woman pic:

Mistakes:

-arms too short, crooked eyes, missing her tail, crown looks weird Dx

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Old 10-13-2007, 01:18 AM

They look nice. Your faces have a lot of personality :3. I really like the first picture's head and face, although the eye could be a little more detailed. Then again, without detail in the eye, it makes her look serious.

Your arms and hands are a little short, especially on the second one. The fingertips should reach about mid-thigh. When you draw the hand, don't forget the wrist- make the arm narrow slightly at the wrist, and come out again for the hand. The legs in the first picture look a little too thin, and the hips look like they should be a little wider in the second.

 


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