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MelanholiC 10-13-2007 05:58 PM

Fell free to look at this piece of art <3
 
if anyone could help me a little bit with it xD

I made a sketch of a character then was really bored and continued with it... colored with markers.. ignored the sketch lines that was left and scanned.. then tried to fix it in photoshop... I think I've done quite well... but....
still is there something more?
then tell me how to do it(if you can)
because I'm kinda new with PS

I know that her anatomy is weird and her hands are weird... but i wasn't serious about this pic in the beginning...
but i just liked it... the clothes anyway xD

http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a3...ts/captain.jpg

Edited picture:
http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a3...in-of-fire.jpg

MelanholiC 10-13-2007 06:05 PM

..>_>' why copying the text?

titaneatomoe 10-13-2007 06:53 PM

I dont know, I like it the way it is. it's your own style of art ^_^ I love the couloring job as well.

fatcat17 10-13-2007 06:56 PM

the reason why that person probably copied and pasted is because the longer you make the post the more gold you get. :3

i like your picture too. i think, what's missing is maybe giving her a simple sort of necklace? i dunno, her shoulder and neck area just seemed really plain to me :/

MelanholiC 10-13-2007 07:08 PM

I've added some more color in her face.. she looked so pale xD

I can't add any necklaces... i don't have a drawing tablet.. so its kinda hard '^^

and thanks for liking it :''3
its my first time using this kind of coloring xD

Larele 10-13-2007 07:29 PM

^^ Nice dress design!

MelanholiC 10-13-2007 07:40 PM

thanks ^^

I know its my pride and joy in this pic.

The Sharpest Spoon 10-13-2007 08:08 PM

I love her skin tone, all the pinks look really good, only problem I see is the lines for her legs look really faded in comparison to the neater lines, maybe darken them or something? I dunno, maybe you wanted it to have that faded look , because it could work... anyway, I'm rambling, but great work! :3

Immortaleyes 10-13-2007 08:16 PM

You can actually open it in PS and add a new layer and draw a necklace, it's not that hard. Of course you probably want to have the layer set to multiple when or if you do a necklace.

Larele 10-13-2007 08:33 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MelanholiC
thanks ^^

I know its my pride and joy in this pic.

You're welcome! ^^ Best of luck with the turn-out!

MelanholiC 10-13-2007 08:39 PM

I did try to make a necklace... but it didn't look good,
sure it was better that she had a necklace... but.. the necklace wasn't looking good >_<'

I made the lines on her legs darker... not with black.. just more shadeing... since i don't want to much attention on the legs.

.... i will update the pic soon >_<

Larele 10-13-2007 08:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MelanholiC
I did try to make a necklace... but it didn't look good,
sure it was better that she had a necklace... but.. the necklace wasn't looking good >_<'

I made the lines on her legs darker... not with black.. just more shadeing... since i don't want to much attention on the legs.

.... i will update the pic soon >_<

=3 I would like to see it finished!

MelanholiC 10-13-2007 08:58 PM

I'm adding it on DA now <3

aonith 10-13-2007 09:06 PM

Hey, you style is interesting and i like this work. Coloring is also great.
Nope, I can't find anything, that is wrong. I think you cleaned all the lines. *nod*

MelanholiC 10-13-2007 09:09 PM

thanks :''3 everyone says that ._.'
that i have a interesting style....

anyways the edited and hopefully completed pic is now uploaded and posted in the first post <3

RoyalSquishy 10-13-2007 09:15 PM

Omigosh.

I
LOVE
UR
STYLE!
<3

You colored this in MARKERS???? HOWW!! I can never color with markers if my life depended on it!

I love her hands: how its so skinny, yet it totally matches your style, so I can't call it an anatomy problem (hurray for drawing anorexic peoples!)

Also, I love the clothes that you drew, like the frills and stuff (im a huge lolita fan)

I like your color choice even more! It matches so well.

Furthermore, you cleaned it up so well! How do you clean up a color drawing on PHOTOSHOP? TEACH ME O GREAT ONE! :D

The only part I don't like are the legs, they throw the picture off for some reason, but I'm not sure why. Maybe its just me >.>

MelanholiC 10-13-2007 09:21 PM

thanks xD
I Am A Proud Lolita so of course I draw Lolita xD

the base and colors are Markers
then was fixed in photoshop
(the scanner destroys the colors)

well.. its my third time with markers so '^^ I totally sucks with markers.. I suck at any color technique... just pick and chose I'm sure I suck at it >_>''

... anorexic people with HUGE BUTTS xD
yeah I draw skinny people..... >.>'

choosing colors may be my only talent xD

since this picture wasn't supose to be more than a sketch on a OC.. thats why her legs are a bit weird...


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