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Old 10-16-2007, 02:52 PM

It's not totally new, albeit, but I was wondering if anyone wnated to give me opinions on a few things.Most of these are my OCs

Done in ten minutes like 3 years ago. I've gotten a bit better...
http://s16.photobucket.com/albums/b3...lfporrtait.jpg

Kasumi Shitenshi- I'd tell you what she is, but you probably don't have an hour...
http://s16.photobucket.com/albums/b3...=KasumiShi.jpg

Fanfiction character I tossed out...I think I tossed her out...O-o Or did I just change her name? I think I just changed her name...
http://s16.photobucket.com/albums/b3...riKazemaru.jpg

This one I am using in a fanfiction. http://s16.photobucket.com/albums/b3...rrent=Khet.jpg

Shaman King Fanfiction character. Never wrote that fanfiction...XD
http://s16.photobucket.com/albums/b3...miKazemaru.jpg

Amethyst Suzuto...she's an FMA character, but there is a moogle next to her....O-o In any case, she's cute, but I need to redo the uniform
http://s16.photobucket.com/albums/b3...hystSuzuto.jpg

Alexandra Frost... she's a mutant/xmen like kind of deal.
http://s16.photobucket.com/albums/b3...rostColour.jpg

The one boy I ever thought was halfway decent...
http://s16.photobucket.com/albums/b3...nt=Thomas2.jpg
http://s16.photobucket.com/albums/b3...nt=Thomas1.jpg

these I traced the facial and eye outline, but did the rest myself.
http://s16.photobucket.com/albums/b3...Expression.jpg

http://s16.photobucket.com/albums/b3...lleHeather.jpg
And neither are my characters, though I do have one a lot like Noelle.

I traced the outline of the overalls, but did the rest myself. Again, not my character
http://s16.photobucket.com/albums/b3...maruAnnaii.jpg

Few weapons, not my best...
http://s16.photobucket.com/albums/b3...kuBardiche.jpg
http://s16.photobucket.com/albums/b3...CombaStaff.jpg
http://s16.photobucket.com/albums/b3...StormSabre.jpg
http://s16.photobucket.com/albums/b3...uWandFinal.jpg

These are massive group shots. I traced problem areas, but all the clothing and the faces are mine. At the time I needed some help working out how the odd angles fitted together. All my characters..XD And that's not even the half of them. But that is all I have drawn.

Aura, Kit, and Satina..
http://s16.photobucket.com/albums/b3...Sleepover2.jpg

Emi, Mishelle, Tara, Akaya, Shadow, Mai
http://s16.photobucket.com/albums/b3...Sleepover1.jpg

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Old 10-17-2007, 01:56 AM

Some crit for ya c:
Work on drawing lighter with your pencils so you don't get your paper so dirty. Sketch as lightly as possible.
Don't color with color pencil (or anything really) if your line art is in pencil.
Work on anatomy and positions. Look in the mirror when you are drawing and think "is this a comfortable/possible pose"
Work on the general size relationship of things/people/items etc.
you have a good start so keep up the hard work.

 


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