
10-20-2007, 04:28 AM
I think they're okay personally (sorry if I'm a bit harsh)
Your first one looks pretty nice, although his head looks a bit flat and his body looks twisted (but, I can't really complain because I do that pose often)
The second one, the head looks a bit too bumpy and her busts look too big (although, that is just my opinion). Furthermore, her arms and hands make her look a bit odd. Her neck also looks kind of fat. Although, I do like that hand that is down. :3
The third one, the face looks a bit distorted and the body looks really skinny. And that peace sign looks funny also. (Oh, sorry, I critiqued on the hands, you should do what arina tanemura does...take pictures and draw them).
All in all, you still have a lot of room to improve in, and I bet you're going to be a really good artist! Just keep practicing and you'll do great. I love your shading, by the way. ;D
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