Ok, here's one of my menewshan avatars headshots, I was wondering what you think? I know the necks a little too long. I was wondering whether or not I should try a shop? (selling at around 100gold) I can do them in colour but no samples on me...

Oppinions?

nice drawing

The eyes are the big part they are to big. You should be able to put 5 eyes acrose(sp) your head.

i think its good
but practice makes perfect....