WEll so fair the drawing itself has takkin me well over a week (im a slow worker)
The shadowing was slightly deemed it looks better then the scanner made it. (DARN IT)
But yea, i cant seem to get the shoulder and arms one the 2 guy or the pants on the main drawing..
Some help please ^ ^ And comments i like those two.
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It looks like shoulder need s bringing up and shortening a little other than that it' looks great. Just darken the shades and shadows as well. Make it stand out more.

I like it it's very nice!

Wow that looks very good!
Well done. :)