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Old 11-10-2007, 10:39 AM

I'm not particularly good, and the lack of scanner is even more limiting. Even so - anyone so kind as to give me a few pointers and such on what's good and bad in these?

Note: All are sketches, and several are unfinished. *sheepish*


No right arm syndrome + camera blur = fail.


Okay, here I can tell that her arms and hands are too small for her body. And her hair looked better on paper. *sulks*


Wow. This is quite old. Anyway, the profile is obviously a bit screwed-up, so I think this picture's greatest merit is the shading. :(


Hee-hee. This was just a little bit different. The figure is deformed - so any tips on making all the limbs deformed in the same way?


No right arm syndrome strikes again! I think his body's too slight for his head.


And this was just a little practice at recreating characters, perspective and posing.

Any con-crit welcomed! :D

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Old 11-10-2007, 01:21 PM

Well...
i was never good at this stuff...
but practising makes perfect. o 3o
work on::
the body sizes of each body part. xD
the postures.

You have good potential though.
keep eet uup. n.n

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Old 11-10-2007, 05:43 PM

The first pic:
I don't know if the hair on her head is suppose to be like that. The hair looks puffy on the head.

Second one:
Yeah, exactly what I think but don't you find the head a little to big for her body too?

And I don't know what to say for the others.
In general you have a special style. <3

 


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