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Dev 11-20-2007 07:50 PM

Something I'm working on.
 
Hey.

My anniversary with my boyfriend is coming up in just udner a week, and I'm drawing this for him.

I REally want some (COnstructive!!!!!!) Criticism please!

Please don't be like the asses on Gaia and just tell me to buy and anatomy book...



http://i6.tinypic.com/6xul951.jpg

pwny_of_doom 11-20-2007 08:22 PM

The wrist is abit small

the palm of the hand needs to be wider
The thumb looks like its coming off the wrist instead of the hand.
Maybe make the fingers alittle longer?

Also she is looking at his eyebrows

other than that it looks great! XD the facial structure looks good to me

Sagitar 11-20-2007 08:41 PM

yes, I agree. I can only find a little mistakes on the arm and hand, but other than that it's looking good!

Caeluma 11-20-2007 09:50 PM

cool I can't wait to see it done. Sorry I am not good with critiques.

kimu 11-21-2007 12:07 AM

The hand looks kinda weird, so you should try making it bigger and smaller on the fingers, I think, something like that xD

And, everything else is k.

I wanna see it when its done * 3*

NoteBook 11-21-2007 10:29 PM

Everything is fantastic !

just work on the hand :wink:

Penny 11-22-2007 12:00 AM

Both of their eyes are positioned on the bridges of their noses.
Her ear needs to be further back. Ears attach to one's head just behind the jaw.


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